Stroga Nona, a loving and loud girl. She can be stubborn and a bit bad at math, but she is sweet, nice, and fun! She always has something to talk about. She can be a little sensitive towards her friends and classmates. Other than that she tends to smile a lot.
FreeSpirit, a small yet terrible little girl who can quite surprise you with her crazy and fun loving spirit. She is small but loves hugs. So as you can see, she isn't all terrible. She can also be very sweet and very sensitive. Wait, wait, wait, beware! Don't make her mad or else, she will freak out!!!!
CrazyLoop, a helpful curly haired girl. She loves animals and can be a little demanding but she is smart, pretty, and fun.
Bob, a quite mysterious and silent. He can be a funny person but he is very shy and only opens up to his close friends.
Hafaw is a tall, funny guitar loving person. He loves music especially Taylor Allyson Swift. He is a fast learner and he cares and loves all his friends.
We made this blog because we thought it would be fun and we would like to experience blogging since not all of us have blogged. Other than that, this blog was created to change a persons heart towards global warming and the extinction of endangered animals. We want to give the future generation a better perspective of how the world was and how it can become.
Stay tuned for our next posts!!!!!!!
Stay tuned for our next posts!!!!!!!
Hello there Keggle!
ReplyDeleteHere are your scores:
Content - 8/10
Coherence - 4/5
Creativity - 4/5
Voice - 5/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 3/5
Intellectual Honesty - 4/5
TOTAL: 37/45
What do you mean "we are a group of combined individuals"? Have you just been engaged to fusion? Or someone tried to glue yourselves together? Kidding aside, the post sounds so amusing that it seems you are having fun in what you are doing. You just have to improve on some grammar aspects and the use of punctuations marks. Try also to add some images so that the post wont be purely text. I'm looking forward for another fun post next time! See yah all!