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By the way we're presidents. . .Just kidding!!! But, just use your IMAGINATION. . .
Think of it for a while. . . . .If we open the BNPP, then the electricity will be a lot cheaper and accessible , thus, would be our solution to the power crisis!
But if the BNPP does open, the cute little turtles will have a chance of dying. So, we say don't open the BNPP for some time. . . . THE POOR TURTLES!
But, let's remember some of the advantages of opening the BNPP. . . The electricity is cheaper and there will be more than enough energy for many. The disadvantages are, like we said, it's very near the nesting grounds of the turtles. Opening this won't be very good for them. If an accident happens with the BNPP, not only the turtles will be affected, but people in that area as well.
It's hard to decide, but we've decided.
We say "SAVE THE TURTLES."
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First of all we are getting mixed up with your words because of all those ...... Make sure to justify so that the post will look cleaner. Your sentences are quite hard to understand like: So, we say don't open the BNPP for some time. . . . THE POOR TURTLES! Sometime? so after some time it's fine to open it? It would have been really great if you elaborated your decision even more. Also there were grammar mistakes like : What would we do if there was a power crisis and the opening of the BNPP was our only solution? Although, remember those cute turtles we talked about? It could have been : If a power crisis occurred and the opening of the BNPP was our only solution will we still open it when those cute turtles are just minutes away from the power plant? some thing like that. Well, you did your best however strive to do better on your next post
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I have nothing else to say. The Lauanites did the job already.