Hey awesome bloggers!!! :P Greetings here from Stroganona and FreeSpirit :D! On behalf of our group, we will be talking about how nuclear energy can help the world and can also destroy it using the same posses. Now first and foremost, what is NUCLEAR ENERGY? Nuclear energy is created by the splitting of a nucleus in an atom. This is called nuclear fission. This process can provide heat and electricity for our houses.
Take a look at this video. It will summarize the
disadvantages of nuclear energy and how we can
solve it.
Some of its advantages are that a nuclear power plant does not give of as much CO2 as coal or oil power plants give off. As mentioned, it can provide heat and electricity for our houses, thus, you can charge your gadgets, use your computer or laptop for school work, personal use and a lot more. It can also provide electricity for malls and other places for playing and leisure. Do you know how some of the materials around you were made? By electricity! But have you ever thought about its disadvantages? Are we in favor of using this? We give it a good "YES, YES WE ARE". Simply because it can provide for many people, it can give more than enough cheap electricity and it's eco-friendly. What more can you ask for?!
We had an awesome field trip to the Philippines' very own nuclear power power plant known as the Bataan Nuclear Power Plant (B.N.P.P.)!
Star Trek! (joke!) :P The Control Room Of BNPP |
That's all of us leaving the power plant. XD girl in the Beatles shirt! |
Till the next post!
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This was a very creative post! You give your readers lots of information, despite the briefness. One thing we'd like to suggest, however, is that you position your pictures better, because it looks slightly cluttered if you just place them all at the end.
All in all, however, this was a very creative and interesting post! Keep it up!
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Very brief, however, some of the required content is missing. Improve you post's layout just as how Dragon Writer mentioned it.